Ordinance on Arrival -- Naomi Lazard

Guest poem sent in by Salima Virani
(Poem #1312) Ordinance on Arrival
 Welcome to you
 who have managed to get here.
 It's been a terrible trip;
 you should be happy you have survived it.
 Statistics prove that not many do.
 You would like a bath, a hot meal,
 a good night's sleep. Some of you
 need medical attention.
 None of this is available.
 These things have always been
 in short supply; now
 they are impossible to obtain.

 This is not
 a temporary situation.
 Our condolences on your disappointment.
 It is not our responsibility
 everything you have heard about this place
 is false. It is not our fault
 you have been deceived,
 ruined your health getting here.
 For reasons beyond our control
 there is no vehicle out.
-- Naomi Lazard
I only recently found out that recent south asian immigrants into Toronto
are called "FOBs" or "Refs" by the first or second generation south asians
who live here.  FOBs means "Fresh off the boats" and Refs means "Refugees".
It does not matter if you came into Canada under the independent category of
skilled labour.  If you have the slightest trace of an Indian accent and,
particularly, if you're struggling as a new immigrant consider yourself a
FOB.

While I am angered by this for various reasons, I find that this poem by
Naomi Lazard which actually alludes specifically to the FOBs (be they from
Vietnam, India or wherever!) really does apply to so many recent immigrants,
the skilled workers - the ones that have not crossed borders and entered
into this country unlawfully (in boats) or pleaded sanctuary as refugees.

When I read this poem, I am reminded of scenes from Bombay, of long lines of
people with their hopeful faces before the US consulate in Breach Candy or
at the visiting Canadian Consulate at Nariman Point.  So many people, from
all over India, who left behind their country with a dream of making it big
in the west.  People who dreamed of having a bright future here for
themselves and their children.

I see these faces now, in Toronto.  It is always a humbling experience.
They drive me home in their cabs or fill gas in my car at full service gas
stations.  Some serve me meals at restaurants and some have cleaned my room
at the Convention Centre hotels where I am attending conferences.  They are
really no different from me.  Had it not been for the financial stability
and support I had from friends and family (on my own arrival into Canada) I
could just as easily have been one of them.   They see a fellow south asian
and we break into conversation.  It does not shock me anymore when they tell
me that they used to be  Civil Engineers, Professors, even Doctors 'back
home'.  These are the people who got lost in the conundrums of
accreditation and gaining "Canadian experience" and succumbed to finding
other ways to make a living.  They came here with only a few hundred dollars
and did not have the financial ability to go back to school and retrain.
It's most challenging when they arrive here with a family.  Accreditation is
a luxury they can ill afford when bills have to be paid and mouths have to
be fed.

And I wonder if they now feel betrayed.  I wonder if it they absolve the
Canadian Government for all the lovely brochures that it prints praising the
life in Canada, when all that they hear after their arrival into Canada is
exactly this:

Our condolences on your disappointment.
It is not our responsibility
everything you have heard about this place
is false. It is not our fault
you have been deceived,
ruined your health getting here.

I know that for these people there is a vehicle out - they could go back to
their homes and professions.  But, every one of them has always given me the
same reason for staying here.  "Our kids will have a better future here and
they will have a better life here.  We're staying here for them".

A bit ironic then, isn't it, that these very kids will grow up and mock
people just like their parents by giving them derogatory terms of reference
like "FOBs" and "REFs"?

- Salima

Bio on Naomi Lazard

Naomi Lazard is more popular for her translations of poems by Faiz Ahmed
Faiz than she is for her own poetry.   Her own poems have appeared in the
American Poetry Review, the Nation, Haroers, the New Yorker. She is author
of several collections of poetry: The Moonlight Upper Deckerina (Sheepmeadow
Press, 1977); Cry of the Peacocks (Harcourt Brace, 1975 ) and Ordinances
(Ardis).

PS: I don't really know anything more about her - perhaps google would help
those who want to know more.

22 comments:

  1. Hi,

    Incidentally, the term "FOB" as well as PIGS [Poor Indian Graduate
    Students] is common across the North American continent. FOB, I believe,
    was used primarily by the second generation East Asians.

    PIGS was created as a reaction to the term "ABCD- American Born Confused
    Desi" sometime in the early 1990's. It was a term usually used by second
    generation Indian Americans to refer to new grad students of Indian
    origin.

    Other Asians also use insensitive terms like "Eggs & Bananas".
    [broken link] http://www.asianwhite.org/egg.html &
    [broken link] http://www.iistix.com/_stixandstones/blendfor1000years.html refer to
    these terms. I don't know whether this is a predominantly Asian habit or
    whether Europeans are susceptible to this trait as well.

    Anyway, nice poem!

    Arun

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  2. Hi Martin

    Today's poem by Naomi Lazard is striking, but I cannot see how it
    "specifically" refers to all the classes of immigrants that Salima
    Virani lists in her comments. It is indeed hard to find on-line
    biographical information on Naomi Lazard, but that poet, translator, and
    American academic seems to have associated herself with the plight of
    the permanently and violently dispossessed peoples of the
    world--specifically Palestinians--and not with the uphill fight
    immigrants of various economic backgrounds may have for full comfortable
    citizenship in places like Toronto. Virani's comment that "I know that
    for these people there is a vehicle out - they could go back to their
    homes and professions" should alert us that Virani is NOT writing about
    the same people whose situation Lazar is describing, people whom the
    poem says have NO such vehicle. But I do not mean to suggest that the
    little biographical background I could find in THE TRUE SUBJECT, (by
    Ali, Agha Shahid, Grand Street, 07345496, Winter90, Vol. 9, Issue
    2--through EbscoHost, for those with access) is the key to the chilling
    Kafkaesque "Ordinance on Arrival." I do not have that key.

    John Burstow
    Winnipeg, Canada

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  3. --- John Burstow wrote:
    > Hi Martin
    >
    > Today's poem by Naomi Lazard is striking, but I cannot see how it
    > "specifically" refers to all the classes of immigrants that Salima
    > Virani lists in her comments. It is indeed hard to find on-line
    > biographical information on Naomi Lazard, but that poet, translator, and
    > American academic seems to have associated herself with the plight of
    > the permanently and violently dispossessed peoples of the
    > world--specifically Palestinians--and not with the uphill fight
    > immigrants of various economic backgrounds may have for full comfortable
    > citizenship in places like Toronto.

    I believe Salima's commentary hinged on the lines

    This is not
    a temporary situation.
    Our condolences on your disappointment.
    It is not our responsibility
    everything you have heard about this place
    is false.

    which seems to speak more to the violently disillusioned than to the violently
    dispossessed.

    > Virani's comment that "I know that
    > for these people there is a vehicle out - they could go back to their
    > homes and professions" should alert us that Virani is NOT writing about
    > the same people whose situation Lazar is describing, people whom the
    > poem says have NO such vehicle.

    Actually, emigrants often burn their boats (and both ends of their candles) to
    the extent that going back to their homes and professions becomes as much of an
    uphill task as staying and trying to make the best of their new lives and
    circumstances.

    > But I do not mean to suggest that the
    > little biographical background I could find in THE TRUE SUBJECT, (by
    > Ali, Agha Shahid, Grand Street, 07345496, Winter90, Vol. 9, Issue
    > 2--through EbscoHost, for those with access) is the key to the chilling
    > Kafkaesque "Ordinance on Arrival." I do not have that key.

    Kafkaesque sums it up nicely. I personally don't believe that Lazard intended
    the poem to restrict itself to any one class of people; conversely, I think it
    applies very well to the class of people Salima wrote about.

    martin

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  4. As one who has chosen to live in India...I must say I have no sympathies
    for Salima's views.....no one forced people to go.....why whine after
    doing something voluntarily

    I do like the deadpan audenesque quality of the poem though

    Jerry

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  5. Dear Minstrels,

    I do not know if comments on poems are in order, but I found this a
    fascinating poem. I work in primary health care and a lot of my work is
    with mother and child care especially during child birth. In developing
    countries, mortality associated with childbirth for both mother and
    child are still so high and for me this poem was as if addressed to the
    newborn who finds the world into which she/he comes a hostile one. So it
    was a surprise to read that this is about refugees, but I suppose for
    many newborns in developing countries their arrival is as it is for the
    refugees of this world.

    Sara Bhattacharji.

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  6. Hah hah. Well, when I was reading it, I thought it was about heaven/the
    afterlife. But either the childbirth or refugee readings seem more
    borne out (a pun! great!) by the text. Indeed, rereading it, it seems
    very much in reference to the many illegal immigrants who come to the
    United States (and Canada, and the UK), under almost unbelievably
    inhumane conditions. It was only about a month ago that a tractor
    trailer full of Mexican immigrants was abandoned by the side of the road
    in Texas (?), with a staggering death toll due to
    suffocation/dehydration. And of course the poem's title "Ordinance on
    Arrival" is particularly cutting, as illegal immigrants are not part of
    the established beaurocratic order, and are not greeted by any official
    ordinances at all.

    However, I like the poem's deliberate ambiguity, which makes the themes
    of struggle, disillusionment, and irrevocability (is that a word?) human
    themes, thereby humanizing the illegals whom it is so easy for us to
    forget, and to excuse their suffering on the basis that "it is not our
    responsibility/everything you have heard about this place is false."

    Very "Hotel California", n'est-ce-pas? "You can check out any time you
    like/but you can never leave."

    carlynn

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  7. A memorable poem, in tone and content reminiscent of some of
    the work of the popular Australian poet, Bruce Dawe.

    I think Martin hit the nail on the head in the last
    paragraph of his comments. Nothing in this poem restricts
    it to any one class of people. It’s a general template (I
    guess that’s what Carlynn means by ‘deliberate ambiguity’)
    for a Kafkaesque nightmare that could apply to arrival in
    any unfamiliar place after an arduous transit or journey,
    though it might fit the details of some situations better
    than others. Besides those already mentioned (refugees,
    immigrants, the newborn, and souls entering the afterlife),
    it could apply, for example, to prisoners transported to a
    concentration camp, or a would-be relief party entering a
    besieged city, or tourists who have crossed dangerous
    terrain to reach some remote place on their itinerary. I
    don’t regard the word ‘Ordinance’ in the title as meaning
    just some official regulation or even formal announcement.
    To me it signifies a key element of the nightmare, namely,
    that the dismaying circumstances conveyed by whoever is in
    charge are presented as unalterable.

    Ian

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  8. I guess the argument could be made that the beauty of poetry is finding and sympathizing with certain element of the poem. i can see where Salima is coming from, however this poem is rather generic and could be applied to multiple instances throughout history. It might be worthwhile to look at the authors biographical data in order to really understand where they are coming from. from what i could find Naomi Lazard has spent a lot of her life in New York which in my opinion screams Ellis Island. I also tend to think of troops first arriving on foreign soil possibly receiving a speech from a commander. This in part may be due to the title "Ordinance" as well as the poems authoritative tone. This is no doubt a coincidence between both title and tone.
    -Charlie

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