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Leaves of Grass, Section 14, Poem 6 -- Walt Whitman

Guest poem submitted by Flavia:
(Poem #1760) Leaves of Grass, Section 14, Poem 6
 A child said, *What is the grass?* fetching it to me with full hands;
 How could I answer the child? I do not know what it is, any more than he.

 I guess it must be the flag of my disposition, out of hopeful green stuff woven.

 Or I guess it is the handkerchief of the Lord,
 A scented gift and remembrancer, designedly dropt,
 Bearing the owner's name someway in the corners, that we may see and remark, and say, *Whose?*

 Or I guess the grass is itself a child, the produced babe of the vegetation.

 Or I guess it is a uniform hieroglyphic;
 And it means, Sprouting alike in broad zones and narrow zones,
 Growing among black folks as among white;
 Kanuck, Tuckahoe, Congressman, Cuff, I give them the same, I receive them the same.

 And now it seems to me the beautiful uncut hair of graves.

 Tenderly will I use you, curling grass;
 It may be you transpire from the breasts of young men;
 It may be if I had known them I would have loved them;

 It may be you are from old people, and from women, and from offspring taken soon out of their mothers' laps;
 And here you are the mothers' laps.

 This grass is very dark to be from the white heads of old mothers;
 Darker than the colorless beards of old men;
 Dark to come from under the faint red roofs of mouths.

 O I perceive after all so many uttering tongues!
 And I perceive they do not come from the roofs of mouths for nothing.

 I wish I could translate the hints about the dead young men and women,
 And the hints about old men and mothers, and the offspring taken soon out of their laps.

 What do you think has become of the young and old men?
 And what do you think has become of the women and children?

 They are alive and well somewhere;
 The smallest sprout shows there is really no death;
 And if ever there was, it led forward life, and does not wait at the end to arrest it,
 And ceas'd the moment life appear'd.

 All goes onward and outward-nothing collapses;
 And to die is different from what any one supposed, and luckier.
-- Walt Whitman
Every now and then new symbols and achetypes get added to the strange tangle
we call the Western Culture. Everybody, wave to the guy who managed to add
that green stuff under your feet. This poem is far from the only time Walt
Whitman mentions grass, but it is the most memorable.

And the truth is, grass *is* fascinating. The only plant that grows on every
continent, including Antarctica, that can grow twenty meters high, or just
be microscopic green fuzz, that grows in sweet water as well as in salt
deserts. *Every* culture on earth that has left the hunter-gatherer stage is
based on grass, whether it's wheat, corn, oats, rice, spelt, rye, etc.
(Sorry, my Alter hanging over my shoulder points out that there are herding
cultures that subsists on meat-and-milk. I should have said every *settled*
culture. Mea culpa.)

In the symbolic flower language, grass means humility, and in the bible it
symbolises decay and the briefness of life. In this poem Walt Whitman turns
this around.

And he called his collected works "Leaves of Grass".

Cool, huh?

Flavia.

Vigil Strange I Kept on the Field One Night -- Walt Whitman

Guest poem submitted by Mark Penney :
(Poem #1559) Vigil Strange I Kept on the Field One Night
 Vigil strange I kept on the field one night;
 When you my son and my comrade dropt at my side that day,
 One look I but gave which your dear eyes return'd with a
        look I shall never forget,
 One touch of your hand to mine O boy, reach'd up as you
        lay on the ground,
 Then onward I sped in the battle, the even-contested
        battle,
 Till late in the night reliev'd to the place at last
        again I made my way,
 Found you in death so cold dear comrade, found your body
        son of responding kisses, (never again on earth
        responding,)
 Bared your face in the starlight, curious the scene, cool
        blew the moderate night-wind,
 Long there and then in vigil I stood, dimly around me
        the battle-field spreading,
 Vigil wondrous and vigil sweet there in the fragrant
        silent night,
 But not a tear fell, not even a long-drawn sigh, long,
        long I gazed,
 Then on the earth partially reclining sat by your side
        leaning my chin in my hands,
 Passing sweet hours, immortal and mystic hours with you
        dearest comrade -- not a tear, not a word,
 Vigil of silence, love and death, vigil for you my son
        and my soldier,
 As onward silently stars aloft, eastward new ones upward
        stole,
 Vigil final for you brave boy, (I could not save you,
        swift was your death,
 I faithfully loved you and cared for you living, I think
        we shall surely meet again,)
 Till at latest lingering of the night, indeed just as the
        dawn appear'd,
 My comrade I wrapt in his blanket, envelop'd well his
        form,
 Folded the blanket well, tucking it carefully over head
        and carefully under feet,
 And there and then and bathed by the rising sun, my son
        in his grave, in his rude-dug grave I deposited,
 Ending my vigil strange with that, vigil of night and
        battle-field dim,
 Vigil for boy of responding kisses, (never again on earth
        responding,)
 Vigil for comrade swiftly slain, vigil I never forget,
        how as day brighten'd,
 I rose from the chill ground and folded my soldier well
        in his blanket,
 And buried him where he fell.
-- Walt Whitman
      This is one of Whitman's tremendous Civil War poems, which were
collected at the time as Drum Taps.  Drum Taps, like virtually all of
Whitman's poetry, eventually was absorbed into the amorphous blob that is
Leaves of Grass, in this case the fourth edition.  One of many remarkable
things about these poems is that they aren't preachy; that is, they don't
overtly take a stand on war in general or the Civil War in particular, they
merely describe.  Whitman's views on the war are left for you to infer.
(Compare this to Wilfred Owen or Siegfried Sassoon.)  The whole of Drum Taps
is much more than the sum of its parts, as all this description has an
undeniably powerful cumulative effect.  But "Vigil Strange," one of the
best, can easily stand on its own as a representative of the rest.

      As with all of Whitman's good poems, free verse does not mean
structureless verse.  "Vigil Strange" begins and ends with a short line,
bookending the description in between.  The lines that begin with "vigil"
and an inversion ("Vigil strange," "Vigil wondrous" and "Vigil final") in
effect divide this poem into three sections -- in plot terms, roughly that's
the battle, the vigil, and the burial.

      The speaker of the poem, by the way, is obviously not Whitman, who was
a non-combatant during the war. (He was a nurse; his non-fictional war
memoirs comprise the interesting part of his prose work Specimen Days.)

      The relationship between the speaker and the dead soldier is
complicated and ambiguous (another Whitman signature).  It's not altogether
clear that they are, biologically speaking, father and son, for there are
too many other choices, in particular suggested by the undeniable hints of
eroticism.  At the very least, we can say that the boy (for obviously he was
quite young) represented many things to the speaker, who chooses a variety
of words to describe the relationship-"my son," "my comrade," and most
interestingly, "my soldier," as if the boy was the speaker's protector.
Mirroring this, the speaker's reaction to the death goes through phases:
near indifference in the face of the "even-contested battle," followed by
the deepest sorrow of the all-night vigil, finally followed by stoic
acceptance:  the burial is of "my soldier," not "my son."  At the final
analysis, the altogether personal reaction to a death just retreats into the
fabric of the war, the "battle-field spreading," and at daybreak the speaker
must reluctantly bury his comrade/son/soldier where he fell, and become once
again a soldier himself.

      Interesting how the night fits into things: The imagery of night and
stars is intertwined with the speaker's grieving: the dead boy's face is
first seen "in the starlight," as "cool blew the moderate night-wind."  Time
during the vigil is marked only by the revolution of the stars in the
firmament.  By contrast, "bathed by the rising sun," the speaker abandons
grieving and turns to the practical matter of burial.  It is only at night,
when not fighting, that the speaker can allow himself the luxury of human
emotions; during the day he is a soldier who cannot grieve.

      I've read this poem probably twenty times, and it never fails to
affect me.

Mark Penney.

I Sit and Look Out -- Walt Whitman

Guest poem submitted by David Wright
(Poem #1042) I Sit and Look Out
 I sit and look out upon all the sorrows of the world, and upon all
     oppression and shame;
 I hear secret convulsive sobs from young men, at anguish with
     themselves, remorseful after deeds done;
 I see, in low life, the mother misused by her children, dying,
     neglected, gaunt, desperate;
 I see the wife misused by her husband--I see the treacherous seducer
     of young women;
 I mark the ranklings of jealousy and unrequited love, attempted to be
     hid--I see these sights on the earth;
 I see the workings of battle, pestilence, tyranny--I see martyrs and
     prisoners;
 I observe a famine at sea--I observe the sailors casting lots who
     shall be kill'd, to preserve the lives of the rest;
 I observe the slights and degradations cast by arrogant persons upon
     laborers, the poor, and upon negroes, and the like;
 All these--All the meanness and agony without end, I sitting, look out
     upon,
 See, hear, and am silent.
-- Walt Whitman
    (from 'Leaves of Grass', 1900)

Monday's Yeats poem [Poem #1040] reminded me so much of this Walt Whitman
verse, I had to share it. Whitman looks at the world's load of woe, and is
silent. Of course he is not silent. His watching is witnessing, and what he
sees he says. For a poet this is enough, more than enough. Although his
words are far from objective, to overtly comment, to share his opinion would
reduce the enormity of what he describes. Whitman as witness.

- David

On the Beach at Night -- Walt Whitman

Guest poem sent in by David Wright
(Poem #984) On the Beach at Night
 On the beach at night,
 Stands a child with her father,
 Watching the east, the autumn sky.

 Up through the darkness,
 While ravening clouds, the burial clouds, in black masses spreading,
 Lower sullen and fast athwarth and down the sky,
 Amid a transparent clear belt of ether yet left in the east,
 Ascends large and calm the lord-star Jupiter,
 And nigh at hand, only a very little above,
 Swim the delicate sisters the Pleiades.

 From the beach the child holding the hand of her father,
 Those burial-clouds that lower victorious soon to devour all,
 Watching, silently weeps.

 Weep not, child,
 Weep not, my darling,
 With these kisses let me remove your tears,
 The ravening clouds shall not be long victorious,
 They shall not long possess the sky, they devour the stars only in
        apparition,
 Jupiter shall emerge, be patient, watch again another night, the Pleiades
        shall emerge,
 They are immortal, all those stars both silvery and golden shall shine
        out again,
 The great stars and the little ones shall shine out again they endure,
 The vast immortal suns and the long-enduring pensive moons shall
        again shine.

 Then dearest child mournest thou only for Jupiter?
 Considerest thou alone the burial of the stars?

 Something there is,
 (With my lips soothing thee, adding I whisper,
  I give thee the first suggestion, the problem and indirection,)
 Something there is more immortal even than the stars,
 (Many the burials, many the days and nights, passing away,)
 Something that shall endure longer even than lustrous Jupiter,
 Longer than sun or any revolving satellite,
 Or the radiant sisters the Pleiades.
-- Walt Whitman
  I've always loved this poem, and recently in the midst of personal losses,
our national pall, and the dark of Winter here in the Northwest, I came back
to it.

  I don't have much to say about the verse -it seems to offer a kind of hope,
an obscure hint of transcendence without the bounds of religion or dogma.  It
is interesting to let Whitman's poem speak with Gerard Manley Hopkins's
wonderful poem (Minstrels Poem #59 - To a Young Child):

        Spring and Fall: to a young child
        Gerard Manley Hopkins

        Margaret, are you grieving
        Over Goldengrove unleaving?
        Leaves, like the things of man, you
        With your fresh thoughts care for, can you?
        Ah! as the heart grows older
        It will come to such sights colder
        By and by, nor spare a sigh
        Though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie;
        And yet you will weep and know why.
        Now no matter, child, the name:
        Sorrow's springs are the same.
        Nor mouth had, no nor mind, expressed
        What heart heard of, ghost guessed:
        It is the blight man was born for,
        It is Margaret you mourn for.

Another related poem, although somewhat lighter, is Wordsworth's.  They make
a nice trio,

        It is a beauteous evening, calm and free,
        The holy time is quiet as a Nun
        Breathless with adoration; the broad sun
        Is sinking down in its tranquility;
        The gentleness of heaven broods o'er the Sea;
        Listen! the mighty Being is awake,
        And doth with his eternal motion make
        A sound like thunder - everlastingly.
        Dear child! dear Girl! that walkest with me here,
        If thou appear untouched by solemn thought,
        Thy nature is not therefore less divine:
        Thou liest in Abraham's bosom all the year;
        And worshipp'st at the Temple's inner shrine,
        God being with thee when we know it not.

          William Wordsworth, 1802

-David

Minstrels Links:

  We've run several of Whitman's poems on Minstrels:
    Poem #54, "When I heard the Learn'd Astronomer" [biography included]
    Poem #157, "O Captain! My Captain!"
    Poem #246, "I Hear America Singing"
    Poem #268, "The Dalliance of the Eagles"
    Poem #445, "A Noiseless Patient Spider"
    Poem #498, "The World Below the Brine"
    Poem #508, "I Saw in Louisiana a Live-Oak Growing"
    Poem #887, "Beat! Beat! Drums!"

Beat! Beat! Drums! -- Walt Whitman

       
(Poem #887) Beat! Beat! Drums!
 Beat! beat! drums! -- blow! bugles! blow!
 Through the windows -- through doors -- burst like a ruthless force,
 Into the solemn church, and scatter the congregation,
 Into the school where the scholar is studying;
 Leave not the bridegroom quiet -- no happiness must he have now with his bride,
 Nor the peaceful farmer any peace, ploughing his field or gathering his grain,
 So fierce you whirr and pound you drums -- so shrill you bugles blow.

 Beat! beat! drums! -- blow! bugles! blow!
 Over the traffic of cities -- over the rumble of wheels in the streets;
 Are beds prepared for sleepers at night in the houses?
                                       no sleepers must sleep in those beds,
 No bargainers bargains by day -- no brokers or speculators --
                                                       would they continue?
 Would the talkers be talking? would the singer attempt to sing?
 Would the lawyer rise in the court to state his case before the judge?
 Then rattle quicker, heavier drums -- you bugles wilder blow.

 Beat! beat! drums! -- blow! bugles! blow!
 Make no parley -- stop for no expostulation,
 Mind not the timid -- mind not the weeper or prayer,
 Mind not the old man beseeching the young man,
 Let not the child's voice be heard, nor the mother's entreaties,
 Make even the trestles to shake the dead where they lie awaiting the hearses,
 So strong you thump O terrible drums -- so loud you bugles blow.
-- Walt Whitman
Today's poem is not so much about war, as about the *idea* of war, and the
terrible urgency with which it can sweep through a nation's consciousness,
consuming or overpowering everything in its path.

The structure and rhythms of the poem reflect that urgency - not the
measured cadence of a marching drum, but the rising, almost hysterical rush
of sound as action seeks to displace thought, as the drums 'rattle quicker,
heavier' and the bugles 'wilder blow'.

It is tempting to view this as purely an antiwar poem - tempting, but overly
simplistic. More accurately, the poem is more descriptive than judgemental,
capturing rather precisely the raised emotions and demanded sacrifices of a
brewing war, and the frightening, jealous power with which an idea, a Cause
can grip a people.

Afterthought:

Yes, today's poem was prompted by the terrorist attack on the World Trade
Center, and its nascent aftermath. A poem that better resonates with my
feelings, though, is MacNeice's "The Sunlight on the Garden", already run on
Minstrels: poem #757

-martin

I Saw in Louisiana a Live-Oak Growing -- Walt Whitman

Guest poem submitted by Zenobia Driver:
(Poem #508) I Saw in Louisiana a Live-Oak Growing
 I saw in Louisiana a live-oak growing,
 All alone stood it and the moss hung down from the branches,
 Without any companion it stood there uttering joyous leaves of dark green,
 And its look, rude, unbending, lusty, made me think of myself,
 But I wondered how it could utter joyous leaves standing alone there
        without its friend near, for I knew I could not,
 And I broke off a twig with a certain number of leaves upon it,
        and twined around it a little moss,
 And brought it away, and I have placed it in sight in my room,
 It is not needed to remind me as of my own dear friends,
 (For I believe lately I think of little else than of them,)
 Yet it remains to me a curious token, it makes me think of manly love;
 For all that, and though the live-oak glistens there in Louisiana
        solitary in a wide flat space,
 Uttering joyous leaves all its life without a friend or lover near,
 I know very well I could not.
-- Walt Whitman
I was reminded of this poem by the ending of 'Wild Geese' [1]. Coincidentally i
was thinking of Whitman's poem this morning anyway - I find it very soothing,
and I love trees and somehow the poem seems to comfort and ward off loneliness
as well. And I really like the description of the tree in the poem...

Zenobia Driver.

[1] Zenobia submitted today's poem back in May, the day we ran Mary Oliver's
'Wild Geese'. You can read the latter poem at poem #426

The World Below the Brine -- Walt Whitman

       
(Poem #498) The World Below the Brine
  The world below the brine,
  Forests at the bottom of the sea, the branches and leaves,
  Sea-lettuce, vast lichens, strange flowers and seeds, the thick tangle
    openings, and pink turf,
  Different colors, pale gray and green, purple, white, and gold, the play
    of light through the water,
  Dumb swimmers there among the rocks, coral, gluten, grass, rushes, and the
    aliment of the swimmers,
  Sluggish existences grazing there suspended, or slowly crawling close to
    the bottom,
  The sperm-whale at the surface blowing air and spray, or disporting with
    his flukes,
  The leaden-eyed shark, the walrus, the turtle, the hairy sea-leopard, and
    the sting-ray,
  Passions there, wars, pursuits, tribes, sight in those ocean-depths,
    breathing that thick-breathing air, as so many do,
  The change thence to the sight here, and to the subtle air breathed by
    beings like us who walk this sphere,
  The change onward from ours to that of beings who walk other spheres.
-- Walt Whitman
Today's poem is striking for the sheer density of its imagery, and the
skilful way it has been used to create an impression of a rich, crowded
undersea world, teeming with life and motion. Whitman's nature poetry stands
in sharp contrast to that of earlier poets, in that he makes little attempt
to 'tame' his subject and capture it neatly in the precise geometrical
framework of a poem. Rather, he sees the world as alive and chaotic, and is
content to let that life and vividness overflow and spill through the page,
leaving always the impression of something far vaster than we can conceive.

Construction:

Like a lot of Whitman's poems, this one is beautifully crafted. The
predominant technique here is the list of images, presented in rapid
succession so that no one image stands out; the effect being to force the
reader to concentrate on the whole, the canvas of the poem on which each
individual item is merely a brushstroke. Note how the poem is built up out
of ever more complex layers - vegetation, colour, life, interaction - until
he reaches the last two lines, and figuratively takes a step back, looking
at the completed work and musing on its relation to 'our' world.

Assessment:

It is virtually impossible to assess Whitman's influence on the various
prosodies of modern poetry. Such American poets as Hart Crane, William
Carlos Williams, and Theodore Roethke all have used Whitman's long line,
extended rhythms, and "shaped" strophes.

        -- EB

Links:

Check out the other Whitman poems in the archive:
[broken link] http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/index_poet.html

Biography and criticism at poem #54

For a vaguely similar, but far 'paler'[1] poem, see poem #140

[1] note that i'm not using the word in a negative sense

-martin

A Noiseless Patient Spider -- Walt Whitman

Guest poem submitted by Divya Guru Rajan :
(Poem #445) A Noiseless Patient Spider
A noiseless patient spider,
I mark'd where on a little promontory it stood isolated,
Mark'd how to explore the vacant vast surrounding,
It launch'd forth filament, filament, filament, out of itself,
Ever unreeling them, ever tirelessly speeding them.

And you O my soul where you stand,
Surrounded, detached, in measureless oceans of space,
Ceaselessly musing, venturing, throwing, seeking the spheres to connect them,
Till the bridge you will need be form'd, till the ductile anchor hold,
Till the gossamer thread you fling catch somewhere, O my soul.
-- Walt Whitman
I came across this poem in an anthology of American poetry. Didn't quite realise
the extent of Whitman's influence till I read Beat generation writing and learnt
that he'd been one of their sources of inspiration.

This might sound pompous and cliched and I might be mistaken too but what really
got me about this poem is the superb manner in which he's depicted the restless
wanderings of a soul, caught in a world that it can only dimly comprehend. One
could relate to it as it connects on a very emotive level and the angst is
almost palpable. By the way this was written in 1862.

Divya.

P.S A stylistical analysis is more than what my noodle can attempt and so I
might have missed out on some important aspects!

The Dalliance of the Eagles -- Walt Whitman

       
(Poem #268) The Dalliance of the Eagles
 Skirting the river road, (my forenoon walk, my rest,)
 Skyward in air a sudden muffled sound, the dalliance of the eagles,
 The rushing amorous contact high in space together,
 The clinching interlocking claws, a living, fierce, gyrating wheel,
 Four beating wings, two beaks, a swirling mass tight grappling,
 In tumbling turning clustering loops, straight downward falling
 Till o'er the river pois'd, the twain yet one, a moment's lull,
 A motionless still balance in the air, then parting, talons loosing,
 Upward again on slow-firm pinions slanting, their separate diverse flight,
 She hers, he his, pursuing.
-- Walt Whitman
A rushing, soaring, stunningly kinetic poem. If Tennyson's eagle was
majestic, Whitman's are *alive*, splashed across the page in a vibrant
celebration of life, sex and energy. To quote from the Britannica's
assessment of his work,

  "Whitman's greatest theme is a symbolic identification of the regenerative
  power of nature with the deathless divinity of the soul. His poems are
  filled with a religious faith in the processes of life, particularly those
  of fertility, sex, and the "unflagging pregnancy" of nature: sprouting
  grass, mating birds, phallic vegetation, the maternal ocean, and planets
  in formation ("the journey-work of stars")."

The language is vivid and descriptive even for Whitman - I find it
impossible to read the poem and not *see* the eagles, spinning and gyrating
against the azure[1] sky.

[1] 'Why azure?' I hear you ask. Well, first off, a poem like this seems to
call for a perfect day as backdrop. But more fundamentally, I suspect that
I'll never be able to see an eagle referred to without having Tennyson's
magnificent poem (see the links) flash through my mind.

Links:

Tennyson's 'Eagle': poem #15

Other Whitman poems, including an extensive biography and assessment:
  poem #54, poem #157, and poem #246.

m.

I Hear America Singing -- Walt Whitman

No prizes for guessing the poet...
(Poem #246) I Hear America Singing
 I hear America singing, the varied carols I hear,
 Those of mechanics, each one singing his as it would be blithe and strong,
 The carpenter singing his as he measures his plank or beam,
 The mason singing his as he makes ready for work, or leaves off work,
 The boatman singing what belongs to him in his boat, the deckhand singing on
the steamboat deck,
 The shoemaker singing as he sits on his bench, the hatter singing as he stands,

 The woodcutter's song, the ploughboy's on his way in the morning, or at noon
intermission or at sundown,
 The delicious singing of the mother, or of the young wife at work, or of the
girl sewing or washing,
 Each singing what belongs to him or her and to none else,
 The day what belongs to the day --- at night the party of young fellows,
robust, friendly,
 Singing with open mouths their strong melodious songs.
-- Walt Whitman
(1860).

For modern readers who've grown up on a steady diet of free verse, it's
difficult to appreciate just how revolutionary Whitman's poetry was for its
time. But think about it - by the mid-1800s, the bright young flames of the
Romantic Revolution had become tired old embers [1]; emotion was obscured by
sentiment; originality by imitation and flattery; righteousness by moralising.
Indeed, a return to the worst excesses of the Augustan poets seemed on the
cards, as writers rehashed the past with no inkling of the way the future was
being shaped around them [2].

Walt Whitman changed all that. His work came like a breath of fresh air to a
reading public stifled by conventional form and diction. His words were simple
and heartfelt, his rhythms natural and unaffected, his ideas sincere and
straightforward. Leaves of Grass is one of the great national epics, a testimony
to the freedom of spirit and endeavour that coloured Whitman's vision of his
country --  he gave a voice to the New World, and in his songs we hear America
singing.

thomas.

PS. This is only a small part of what I have to say about Walt Whitman; I've
saved the rest (both good and bad) for later. Watch this space!

[Footnotes]

[1] Browning's wonderful The Lost Leader chronicles just this phenomenon - the
'betrayal' by Wordsworth of the revolutionary cause, to become a Pillar of the
Establishment (tm). You can read it at poem #130

[2] Funnily enough, it was in the United States that this effect was most
pronounced. My own theory is that  the breaking of political and sanguinary ties
with the Olde Worlde prompted American poets to reaffirm their cultural roots to
a degree far greater than they otherwise would have done.

[Previous Poems]

When I Heard The Learn'd Astronomer is a poem I strongly dislike because of its
central thesis; nevertheless, it's worth reading for the artistry of its verse
alone.  You can find it at poem #54
In addition to the poem itself, there's a brief biography of Whitman, and a
longish essay on his importance as a poet (this essay expands on what I've said
today, and has a lot more interesting material besides).

Oh Captain! My Captain! is one of Whitman's most popular poems, and justly so.
It's archived at poem #157

And of course, you can read all of our previous poems at
http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/

O Captain! My Captain! -- Walt Whitman

And rounding out the 'old favourites' theme...
(Poem #157) O Captain! My Captain!
 O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done;
 The ship has weather'd every rack, the prize we sought is won;
 The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
 While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring:
     But O heart! heart! heart!
       O the bleeding drops of red,
         Where on the deck my Captain lies,
           Fallen cold and dead.

 O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells;
 Rise up--for you the flag is flung--for you the bugle trills;
 For you bouquets and ribbon'd wreaths--for you the shores a-crowding;
 For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning;
     Here Captain! dear father!
       This arm beneath your head;
         It is some dream that on the deck,
           You've fallen cold and dead.

 My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still;
 My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will;
 The ship is anchor'd safe and sound, its voyage closed and done;
 From fearful trip, the victor ship, comes in with object won;
     Exult, O shores, and ring, O bells!
       But I, with mournful tread,
         Walk the deck my Captain lies,
           Fallen cold and dead.
-- Walt Whitman
This is one of the poems that I read and enjoyed as a child, but which lost
its appeal somewhat with age and familiarity. However, I recently came
across the following piece of background info, of which I was entirely
unaware - quoting from a note on the poem:

  Abraham Lincoln's assassination at Ford's Theater is too familiar a story
  for me to rehash here. In a nation numbed by death in the just-ended War,
  this death was the more deeply felt. Whitman felt a deep personal grief,
  and he shows it in another well-known poem 'When lilacs last at the
  dooryard bloomed'[1]. In [O Captain, my Captain], though, he captures the
  mass mood.  -- Bob Blair

  [1] <[broken link] http://www.geocities.com/~spanoudi/poems/whitm01.html>

Which epiphany should be sufficient commentary on the poem - for
Whitman-related stuff, see Poem #54

m.

When I heard the Learn'd Astronomer -- Walt Whitman

       
(Poem #54) When I heard the Learn'd Astronomer
 When I heard the learn'd astronomer;
 When the proofs, the figures, were ranged in columns before me;
 When I was shown the charts and the diagrams, to add, divide, and
       measure them;
 When I, sitting, heard the astronomer, where he lectured with much
       applause in the lecture-room,
 How soon, unaccountable, I became tired and sick;
 Till rising and gliding out, I wander'd off by myself,
 In the mystical moist night-air, and from time to time,
 Look'd up in perfect silence at the stars.
-- Walt Whitman
I like this poem. This does not, however, imply that I agree with any of the
sentiments expressed therein <g>. Whitman presents the ages-old argument
that science, in its relentless probing of nature, has somehow contrived to
rob it of its beauty, its mystery. Of course, it has done no such thing;
there is a beauty in the proofs and equations that gladly coexists with, and
complements the more 'poetic', sensory side of things.

Returning to the poem, note the wonderful quality of the verse itself. There
is a common misconception that 'free' verse implies a total disregard of
form; this is, of course, far from the truth. I urge you to read this poem
aloud, the better to appreciate the way in which Whitman has echoed his
reaction to the lecture in the long, somewhat droning lines that make no
attempt to mirror the natural rhythms of speech, and the instant easing of
strain when he leaves, allowing 'poetry' to reassert itself.

And for Thomas's view on the matter [curiously enough, written after mine;
it seems that great minds *do* think alike <g>]:

<comment>

Much as I hate to do this to Martin...

There are some poems which I don't mind too much, some which I tolerate,
some which I positively dislike, and some which I cannot stand. Today's
poem, I'm afraid to say, is one of the latter.

Not that I have anything against Whitman, mind you. I like most of his
poetry a great deal.  But even great poets have their off days, I
suppose...

The thing that gets my goat about today's poem is the basic conceit -
that Science, by measuring and analysing the natural world, somehow
detracts from its innate beauty. I guess it comes down to a personal
point of view (though I for one am against this entire 'two cultures'
divide - I don't see why the two world-views should collide at all);
nevertheless, I take issue with all those poets (and yes, scientists)
who propagate it. I fail to see how understanding Nature gets in the way
of appreciating it; indeed, to me, there is something wonderfully poetic
about the notion that there are millions of stars in millions of
galaxies, further than the eye can see, each with their own solar
systems and cometary halos and asteroid belts and ringed planets and red
spots and blue planets...

Any poet who thinks that science is an impersonal, mechanical monster,
committed to destroying beauty and truth and the joy of individuality,
reducing the Universe to facts and figures, charts and numbers, doesn't
know the first thing about science.

Any scientist who thinks that poets are woolly-headed romantics, living
in a world of their own, indulging in utterly impractical flights of
fancy, building castles in the air without knowing or caring about the
basics of structural architecture, doesn't know the first thing about
poetry.

There, that's my quota of invective for the day.

thomas.

</comment>

Biographical Note:

b. May 31, 1819, West Hills, Long Island, N.Y., U.S.
d. March 26, 1892, Camden, N.J.

in full WALTER WHITMAN, American poet, journalist, and essayist whose verse
collection Leaves of Grass is a landmark in the history of American literature.

  Whitman had spent a great deal of his 36 years walking and observing in
  New York City and Long Island. He had visited the theatre frequently and
  seen many plays of William Shakespeare, and he had developed a strong love
  of music, especially opera. During these years he had also read
  extensively at home and in the New York libraries, and he began
  experimenting with a new style of poetry. While a schoolteacher, printer,
  and journalist he had published sentimental stories and poems in
  newspapers and popular magazines, but they showed almost no literary
  promise.

  By the spring of 1855 Whitman had enough poems in his new style for a thin
  volume. Unable to find a publisher, he sold a house and printed the first
  edition of Leaves of Grass at his own expense. No publisher's name, no
  author's name appeared on the first edition in 1855. But the cover had a
  portrait of Walt Whitman, "broad shouldered, rouge fleshed,
  Bacchus-browed, bearded like a satyr." Though little appreciated upon its
  appearance, Leaves of Grass was warmly praised by the poet and essayist
  Ralph Waldo Emerson, who wrote to Whitman on receiving the poems that it
  was "the most extraordinary piece of wit and wisdom" America had yet
  contributed.

  [...]

  At the time of his death Whitman was more respected in Europe than in his
  own country. It was not as a poet, indeed, but as a symbol of American
  democracy that he first won recognition. In the late 19th century his
  poems exercised a strong fascination on English readers who found his
  championing of the common man idealistic and prophetic.

        -- EB

Viewpoint:

  Under the influence of the Romantic movement in literature and art,
  Whitman held the theory that the chief function of the poet was to express
  his own personality in his verse. The first edition of Leaves of Grass
  also appeared during the most nationalistic period in American literature,
  when critics were calling for a literature commensurate with the size,
  natural resources, and potentialities of the North American continent. "We
  want" shouted a character in Henry Wadsworth Longfellow's Kavanagh (1849),
  "a national literature altogether shaggy and unshorn, that shall shake the
  earth, like a herd of buffaloes thundering over the prairies." With the
  same fervour, Whitman declared in his 1855 preface, "Here are the roughs
  and beards and space and ruggedness and nonchalance that the soul loves."
  In Leaves of Grass he addressed the citizens of the United States, urging
  them to be large and generous in spirit, a new race nurtured in political
  liberty, and possessed of united souls and bodies.

  It was partly in response to nationalistic ideals and partly in accord
  with his ambition to cultivate and express his own personality that the
  "I" of Whitman's poems asserted a mythical strength and vitality. [...]
  From this time on throughout his life Whitman attempted to dress the part
  and act the role of the shaggy, untamed poetic spokesman of the proud
  young nation. For the expression of this persona he also created a form of
  free verse without rhyme or metre, but abounding in oratorical rhythms and
  chanted lists of American place-names and objects. He learned to handle
  this primitive, enumerative style with great subtlety and was especially
  successful in creating empathy of space and movement, but to most of his
  contemporaries it seemed completely "unpoetic." Both the content and the
  style of his verse also caused Whitman's early biographers, and even the
  poet himself, to confuse the symbolic self of the poems with their
  physical creator. In reality Whitman was quiet, gentle, courteous; neither
  "rowdy" (a favourite word) nor lawless. In sexual conduct he may have been
  unconventional, though no one is sure, but it is likely that the six
  illegitimate children he boasted of in extreme old age were begotten by
  his imagination. He did advocate greater sexual freedom and tolerance, but
  sex in his poems is also symbolic--of natural innocence, "the procreant
  urge of the world," and of the regenerative power of nature. In some of
  his poems the poet's own erotic emotions may have confused him, but in his
  greatest, such as parts of "Song of Myself" and all of "Out of the Cradle
  Endlessly Rocking," sex is spiritualized.

  Whitman's greatest theme is a symbolic identification of the regenerative
  power of nature with the deathless divinity of the soul. His poems are
  filled with a religious faith in the processes of life, particularly those
  of fertility, sex, and the "unflagging pregnancy" of nature: sprouting
  grass, mating birds, phallic vegetation, the maternal ocean, and planets
  in formation ("the journey-work of stars"). The poetic "I" of Leaves of
  Grass transcends time and space, binding the past with the present and
  intuiting the future, illustrating Whitman's belief that poetry is a form
  of knowledge, the supreme wisdom of mankind.

        -- EB

Criticism:

  Whitman's aim was to transcend traditional epics, to eschew normal
  aesthetic form, and yet by reflecting American society to enable the poet
  and his readers to realize themselves and the nature of their American
  experience. He has continued to hold the attention of very different
  generations because he offered the welcome conviction that "the crowning
  growth of the United States" was to be spiritual and heroic and because he
  was able to uncompromisingly express his own personality in poetic form.
  Modern readers can still share his preoccupation with the problem of
  preserving the individual's integrity amid the pressures of mass
  civilization. Scholars in the 20th century, however, find his social
  thought less important than his artistry. T.S. Eliot said, "When Whitman
  speaks of the lilacs or the mockingbird his theories and beliefs drop away
  like a needless pretext." Whitman invigorated language; he could be strong
  yet sentimental; and he possessed scope and inventiveness. He portrayed
  the relationships of man's body and soul and the universe in a new way,
  often emancipating poetry from contemporary conventions. He had sufficient
  universality to be considered one of the greatest American poets.

        -- EB yet again.

m.