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Crossing the Frontier -- A D Hope

Guest poem sent in by William Grey
(Poem #1807) Crossing the Frontier
 Crossing the frontier they were stopped in time,
 Told, quite politely, they would have to wait:
 Passports in order, nothing to declare
 And surely holding hands was not a crime
 Until they saw how, ranged across the gate,
 All their most formidable friends were there.

 Wearing his conscience like a crucifix,
 Her father, rampant, nursed the Family Shame;
 And, armed with their old-fashioned dinner-gong,
 His aunt, who even when they both were six,
 Had just to glance towards a childish game
 To make them feel that they were doing wrong.

 And both their mothers, simply weeping floods,
 Her head-mistress, his boss, the parish priest,
 And the bank manager who cashed their cheques;
 The man who sold him his first rubber-goods;
 Dog Fido, from whose love-life, shameless beast,
 She first observed the basic facts of sex.

 They looked as though they had stood there for hours;
 For years -- perhaps for ever. In the trees
 Two furtive birds stopped courting and flew off;
 While in the grass beside the road the flowers
 Kept up their guilty traffic with the bees.
 Nobody stirred. Nobody risked a cough.

 Nobody spoke. The minutes ticked away;
 The dog scratched idly. Then, as parson bent
 And whispered to a guard who hurried in,
 The customs-house loudspeakers with a bray
 Of raucous and triumphant argument
 Broke out the wedding march from Lohengrin.

 He switched the engine off: "We must turn back."
 She heard his voice break, though he had to shout
 Against a din that made their senses reel,
 And felt his hand, so tense in hers, go slack.
 But suddenly she laughed and said: "Get out!
 Change seats! Be quick!" and slid behind the wheel.

 And drove the car straight at them with a harsh,
 Dry crunch that showered both with scraps and chips,
 Drove through them; barriers rising let them pass
 Drove through and on and on, with Dad's moustache
 Beside her twitching still round waxen lips
 And Mother's tears still streaming down the glass.
-- A D Hope
This is submitted as a juxtaposition and contrast with Seamus Heaney [1].
Both Hope and Heaney use the frontier metaphor, but each uses it to explore
very different themes. Heaney's concern is the struggle of the writer in
what is experienced as a hostile environment. (I read Heaney's menacing
antagonists as his readers and critics.) Hope is writing about pre-marital
sex, an issue of not much concern today, but one which was more problematic
for an earlier generation. (In particular before the advent of reliable oral
contraceptives.  The poem is dated 1963.)  In Hope's case the menacing
antagonists at the frontier are conventional morality and its upholders
(parents, head-mistress, the parish priest). Interestingly in Hope's poem
the decisive move to break the shackles of conventional morality is taken by
the woman. (John Taber remarked earlier on Hope's characteristically
positive treatment of women in his comment on [2]. This is further support
for Taber's claim.)

The poem was published in [3].

William Grey

[1] Poem #1807, 'From the Frontier of Writing, Seamus Heaney
[2] Poem #1568, 'His Coy Mistress to Mr Marvell', A.D. Hope
[3] A.D. Hope, 'Collected Poems (1930-1965)'. London: Hamish Hamilton, 1966.

From the Frontier of Writing -- Seamus Heaney

Guest poem submitted by Janice:
(Poem #1806) From the Frontier of Writing
 The tightness and the nilness round that space
 when the car stops in the road, the troops inspect
 its make and number and, as one bends his face

 towards your window, you catch sight of more
 on a hill beyond, eyeing with intent
 down cradled guns that hold you under cover

 and everything is pure interrogation
 until a rifle motions and you move
 with guarded unconcerned acceleration --

 a little emptier, a little spent
 as always by that quiver in the self,
 subjugated, yes, and obedient.

 So you drive on to the frontier of writing
 where it happens again. The guns on tripods;
 the sergeant with his on-off mike repeating

 data about you, waiting for the squawk
 of clearance; the marksman training down
 out of the sun upon you like a hawk.

 And suddenly you're through, arraigned yet freed,
 as if you'd passed from behind a waterfall
 on the black current of a tarmac road

 past armor-plated vehicles, out between
 the posted soldiers flowing and receding
 like tree shadows into the polished windscreen.
-- Seamus Heaney
Another favourite of mine. Exquisity Heaney: compact, compressed,
beautifully simple yet spiralling with meaning upon meaning. Here an
unfortunately commonplace event - a road check - is compared to the act of
writing, or perhaps the struggle of the act of writing. Again fraught with
tension, "pure interrogation", the poem captures the mood, the silent
watchfulness of a politically unstable area. There are various
interpretations of this poem and I personally find it difficult to pinpoint
what the Frontier of Writing is -- is it a space (mental or physical), an
idea or the act of writing itself? When I reach the last few lines however,
it doesn't even seem to matter -- "out between / the posted soldiers flowing
and receding / like tree shadows into the polished windscreen". It is an
image that is startling and stays with me.

Hope you enjoy it!

True Love at Last -- D H Lawrence

Guest poem sent in by Sarah Korah
(Poem #1805) True Love at Last
 The handsome and self-absorbed young man
 looked at the lovely and self-absorbed girl
 and thrilled.

 The lovely and self-absorbed girl
 looked back at the handsome and self-absorbed young man
 and thrilled.

 And in that thrill he felt:
 Her self-absorption is even as strong as mine.
 I must see if I can't break through it
 And absorb her in me.

 And in that thrill she felt:
 His self-absorption is even stronger than mine!
 What fun, stronger than mine!
 I must see if I can't absorb this Samson of self-absorption.

 So they simply adored one another
 and in the end
 they were both nervous wrecks, because
 in self-absorption and self-interest they were equally matched.
-- D H Lawrence
Here comes D.H.Lawrence's take on true love... in the land of the self
obsessed :) This quirky, irreverent counterpoint to True Love makes the case
that there is something essentially selfless about love; or it is not the
real thing.

Sarah Korah

[Martin adds]

In a lighter - or, at least, friendler - vein, I was reminded of Lawrence's
playfully romantic "Intimates" [Poem #110] - it is interesting to note the
superficial similarity of theme, but wide disparity of intent, between the
two poems.

[Links]

Wislawa Szymborska's beautiful True Love poem can be read at
http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/poems/694.html

Minstrels has more D.H.Lawrence poems at
http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/poems/1282.html
http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/poems/77.html

Elegy -- Machine Head

Guest poem sent in by "Toby Gray"
(Poem #1804) Elegy
 Elegies are to be sung
 Winds of Armageddon come
 Ignorance within your bliss
 Soon you will atone for this
 In your carcinogenic haze
 Baneful of a newer age
 Flowers of a different scent
 Poisons of the earths lament

 A requiem
 Earth belong not to you
 Belong all we to her

 Take another deeper breath
 Inhale invisible death
 Pollution fills the land and sky
 Forever you justify
 Take a deeper look and see
 Nothing's left to future seeds
 Icicles melt in the blood
 Ashes where there once was wood

 A requiem
 Earth belong not to you
 Belong all we to her

 Pain of life has pulled you under
 Left you there to bleed and wonder
 Open heart is torn asunder
 Wrong the wrongs that you've been suffered
 "Kill" we scream in roaring thunder
 Destroy all, leave all things plundered

 Acid rain cries her pain
 Full bloom, a world gone insane
 Her anger the flower
 Plays God with all of our lives

 A requiem
 Earth belong not to you
 Belong all we to her
-- Machine Head
    (from the album Through the Ashes of Empires)

This is my favourite poem (well, song lyrics actually). It may not be a
masterpiece of pattern and structure, but sometimes simplicity has a power
all its own (although it's obviously better with the music to back it up).
The line "Ashes where there once was wood" never fails to move me with a
combination of anger and sadness, but the main reason I like it so much is
"Earth belong not to you, belong all we to her". I'm eternally amazed by how
many people find this simple concept so difficult to grasp.

Toby

[Links]

Wikipedia page: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Machine_Head_%28band%29

Power and Glory -- Phil Ochs

Chiming in on the American patriotism theme:
(Poem #1803) Power and Glory
 Come and take a walk with me through this green and growing land
 Walk through the meadows and the mountains and the sand
 Walk through the valleys and the rivers and the plains
 Walk through the sun and walk through the rain

   This is a land full of power and glory
   Beauty that words cannot recall
   Oh her power shall rest on the strength of her freedom
   Her glory shall rest on us all

 From Colorado, Kansas, and the Carolinas too
 Virginia and Alaska, from the old to the new
 Texas and Ohio and the California shore
 Tell me, who could ask for more

 Yet she's only as rich as the poorest of her poor
 Only as free as the padlocked prison door
 Only as strong as our love for this land
 Only as tall as we stand
-- Phil Ochs
Ever since I first discovered Phil Ochs, I have been mystified at his
relative obscurity and lack of popularity. Personally, at his best he's
every bit as good as his contemporary Bob Dylan (and a lot more pleasant to
listen to!), and seems to inspire an intensity of appreciation in his fans -
myself included - that many more popular singers would be hard-pressed to
match.

Today's song, while not really among his best lyrically, is nonetheless
nicely representative of his style. Ochs's songs were informed by his
journalism background; indeed, he described himself as a "singing
journalist", a description that Dylan echoed rather more disparagingly with
his "You're not a folksinger, you're a journalist". Either way, the
assessment was accurate, and even his less topical songs, like today's, have
a refreshing clarity and directness to them.

This is, predictably enough, a much better song in performance - it still
suffers a bit from inconsistency of quality, but the first and last verses
are both catchy and memorable, and lyrics that seem flat and trite on the
printed page acquire a vibrant energy with music added. While it might not
have been the song I'd have selected if asked for a Phil Ochs piece at
random, it's usually the first song I think of on the current theme, and
definitely worth a listen.

martin

[Links]

Wikipedia on Ochs:
  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phil_Ochs

Some retrospectives:
  http://www.furious.com/perfect/philochs.html
  http://www.zmag.org/ZMag/articles/nov97carter.htm

Collections of Ochs links:
  [broken link] http://philochs.pitas.com/
  http://www.cs.pdx.edu/~trent/ochs/