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The Maldive Shark -- Herman Melville

       
(Poem #775) The Maldive Shark
 About the Shark, phlegmatical one,
 Pale sot of the Maldive sea
 The sleek little pilot-fish, azure and slim,
 How alert in attendence be.
 From his saw-pit mouth, from his charnel of maw
 The have nothing of harm to dread,
 But liquidly glide on his ghastly flank
 Or before his Gorgonian head;
 Or lurk in the port of serrated teeth
 In white triple tiers of glittering gates,
 And there find a haven when peril's abroad,
 An asylum in jaws of the Fates!
 They are friends; and friendly they guide him to prey,
 Yet never partake of the treat--
 Eyes and brains to the dotard lethargic and dull,
 Pale ravener of horrible meat.
-- Herman Melville
Melville has none of the airiness or delicacy of, say, Keats or Flecker
(whose respective ages he neatly bisects). Instead, his verse is _chunky_,
with layer upon layer of densely piled phrases, murky and threatening and
yet strangely vivid. The net effect is powerful, and not completely benign:
the ominous cadences add to the terror of the shark, the 'pale ravener of
horrible meat'...

thomas.

[Poetry and Prose]

Herman Melville is, of course, more famous as a writer of prose - and what
prose! His masterpiece 'Moby Dick' is generally considered one of the
greatest novels of all time - wildly, incredibly inventive, linguistically
and philosophically challenging, and a rollicking good adventure to boot. It
may not be the easiest of reads to get through, but it's definitely worth
the effort. http://www.melville.org/ has more on the writer and his work.

Martin once ran a week of "poems written by writers of prose"; check out
Poem #179, "Missed", P. G. Wodehouse
Poem #181, "The Guards Came Through", Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
Poem #183, "Sorrows of Werther", William Makepeace Thackeray
and, later:
Poem #259, "Songs from an Evil Wood", Lord Dunsany
Poem #261, "Recompense", Robert E. Howard
Poem #664, "Conceit", Mervyn Peake
Poem #701, "Teeth", Spike Milligan

While the above examples may be by and large unremarkable, they do serve to
highlight the achievement of writers such as Thomas Hardy and Rudyard
Kipling, who achieved equal acclaim for both forms of their art. D. H.
Lawrence, Oliver Goldsmith and Edgar Allan Poe are hardly any less
distinguished than the two giants named above, while J. R. R. Tolkien and
Lewis Carroll deserve special recognition for the way their prose is
immeasurably enhanced by the inclusion of verse - so much so that the two
are well nigh inseparable (in this reviewer's mind, at least). Boris
Pasternak and Jorge Luis Borges round out the list; all these writers can be
found on the Minstrels website, at
[broken link] http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/index_poet.html .

For an essay on the necessary distinction between poetry and other forms of
expression, see poem #349.

Ray -- Hayden Carruth

Guest poem submitted by David Wright:
(Poem #774) Ray
 How many guys are sitting at their kitchen tables
     right now, one-thirty in the morning, this same
 time, eating a piece of pie? - that's what I
     wondered.  A big piece of pie, because I'd just
 finished reading Ray's last book.  Not good pie,
     not like my mother or my wife could've
 made, but an ordinary pie I'd just bought, being
     alone, at the Tops Market two hours ago.  And how
 many had water in their eyes?  Because of Ray's
     book, and especially those last poems written
 after he knew: the one about the doctor telling
     him, the one where he and Tess go down to
 Reno to get married before it happens and shoot
     some craps on the dark baize tables, the one
 called "After-Glow" about the little light in the
     sky after the sun sets.  I can just hear him,
 if he were still here and this were somebody
     else's book, saying, "Jesus," saying, "This
 is the saddest son of a bitch of a book I've
     read in a long time," saying "A real long time."
 And the thing is, he knew we'd be saying this
     about his book, he could just hear us saying it,
 and in some part of him he was glad!  He
     really was.  What crazies we writers are,
 our heads full of language like buckets of minnows
     standing on the moonlight on a dock.  Ray
 was a good writer, a wonderful writer, and his
     poems are good, most of them, and they made me
 cry, there at my kitchen table with my head down,
     me, a sixty-seven-year-old galoot, an old fool
 because all old men are fools, they have to be,
     shoveling big jagged chunks of that ordinary pie
 into my mouth, and the water falling from my eyes
     onto that pie, the plate, my hand, little speckles
 shining into the light, brightening the colors, and I
     ate that goddamn pie, and it tasted good to me.
-- Hayden Carruth
I love Raymond Carver's writing and I love Hayden Carruth's writing, and
this is such a fitting eulogy, their sensibilities are so similar. I'm not
sure I buy the initial "How many guys ... that's what I'm wondering," as a
device, but I don't care. This image of the man, the old man, sitting up
late at night, crying and shoveling in pie, just gets me. I can hear it, the
noises of the plate and fork, the breathing, the weeping, the eating.

There's a haiku by Ryusui - in a translation by R. H. Blyth it goes:

      The lost child
  Crying, crying, but still
   Catching the fire-flies.

That sublimely human moment when grief and the forgetfulness of grief are
there together. Just precious, and funny, too. One of the things I enjoy
about this poem that I don't like about some other confessions is his deadly
serious appreciation of pain doesn't eclipse his humor. Like in the line
"finished reading Ray's last book.  Not good pie,".

The book he is referring to in the poem is "A New Path to the Waterfall", a
volume of poetry the Raymond Carver wrote at the very end of his life. All
of his poetry has since been collected into a single volume, "All of Us",
which you probably ought to rush right out and buy.   Carruth's own stuff
has recently been sliced and diced into some nice collections as well.

The Academy of American Poets website (http://www.poets.org/) has a page on
Carruth which links to some other content on the web.

David.

PS. Oh, one more little poem, also by Carruth:

 "The Last Poem In The World"

 Would I write it, if I could?
 Bet your glitzy ass I would.

        -- Hayden Carruth

PPS. Minstrels Poem #684, "Scrambled Eggs and Whiskey", Hayden Carruth.

Untitled -- Bhartrihari

Guest poem submitted by Anustup Datta:
(Poem #773) Untitled
 She who is always in my thoughts prefers
  Another man, and does not think of me.
 Yet he seeks for another's love, not hers;
 And some poor girl is grieving for my sake.
         Why then, the devil take
 Both her and him; and love; and her; and me.
-- Bhartrihari
In stark contrast [to e. e. cummings' love poetry - t.] is this short
quatrain (in the Sanskrit) from Bhartrihari - a man who wrote fiery love
poems in his youth and turned to the renunciation of worldly pleasures in
his old age. The theme is not new - love can be terribly confusing - but the
mode of expression is really charming and captures the frustration of the
lover perfectly. A little gem, which grows on you as you read it a second
time.

Anustup.

[Biography]

  born AD 570?, Ujjain, Malwa, India
  died 651?, Ujjain

Hindu philosopher and poet-grammarian, author of the Vakyapadiya ("Words in
a Sentence"), regarded as one of the most significant works on the
philosophy of language, earning for him a place for all time in the
sabdadvaita (word monistic) school of Indian thought.

Of noble birth, Bhartrihari was attached for a time to the court of the
Maitraka king of Valabhi (modern Vala, Gujarat), where most likely his taste
for sensuous living and material possessions was formed. Following the
example of Indian sages, he believed he must renounce the world for a higher
life. Seven times he attempted monastic living, but his attraction to women
caused him to fail each time. Though intellectually he presumably understood
the transitory nature of worldly pleasures and felt a call to yoga and
ascetic living, he was unable to control his desires. After a long
self-struggle, Bhartrihari became a yogi and lived a life of dispassion in a
cave in the vicinity of Ujjain until his death.

Bhartrihari entitled three of his works sataka ("century"): The Sringara
(love) -sataka, Niti (ethical and polity) -sataka, and Vairagya (dispassion)
-sataka. Although all three are attributed to him, only the first is
regarded as his with certainty by most scholars. In another work sometimes
attributed to Bhartrihari, the Bhatti kavya ("Poem of Bhatti"), he performs
linguistic gymnastics to demonstrate the subtleties of Sanskrit.

        -- EB

Sadness of Summer -- Stéphane Mallarmé

Guest poem submitted by Alisha Hamilton:
A French poem that mixes vibrant imagery and stark emotion:
(Poem #772) Sadness of Summer
 Mingling a potion for his thirst in the sun
 Dries on your cheek the tears with perfume straying,
 My sweet opponent! languorously fordone,
 Bathed in your warm hair, love's fatigue allaying.

 The stillness of burning hair, the half-won kiss
 Have saddened you, and now I hear you saying:
 "We two shall never lie embalmed as one
 Beneath the eternal sand and palm trees playing."

 Yet in your warm golden hair, downward flowing,
 I find Nirvana and leave you unknowing,
 And drown unfaltering my soul, my bane;

 And taste your darkened lashes smudged with tears
 And drugging the heart you pierced with joy and pain,
 Take on the hardness of these azure spheres.
-- Stéphane Mallarmé
Images of bright and warm colours abound.  While she knows that the love
affair will end with the coming of the fall, he buries himself in her.  She
causes so much pain, but he finds such bliss in her presence.  Melancholy
weaves itself into this poem.  The melancholy she feels is contrasted by the
Nirvana that he finds.  He is trying to take in the last memories of her
before they say goodbye forever.  A complex poem, but it needs no
interpretation.  Everyone has either felt his or her perspective in a
romance.  It's a poem that's easy to identify with.

Alisha.

[Biography]

   born March 18, 1842, Paris, France.
   died September 9, 1898, Valvins, near Fontainebleau, France.

French poet, an originator (with Paul Verlaine) and a leader of the
Symbolist movement in poetry.

Mallarmé enjoyed the sheltered security of family life for only five brief
years, until the early death of his mother in August 1847. This traumatic
experience was echoed 10 years later by the death of his younger sister
Maria, in August 1857, and by that of his father in 1863. These tragic
events would seem to explain much of the longing Mallarmé expressed, from
the very beginning of his poetic career, to turn away from the harsh world
of reality in search of another world; and the fact that this remained the
enduring theme of his poetry may be explained by the comparative harshness
with which adult life continued to treat him. After spending the latter part
of 1862 and the early months of 1863 in London so as to acquire a knowledge
of English, he began a lifelong career as a schoolteacher, first in
provincial schools (Tournon, Besançon, and Avignon) and later in Paris. He
was not naturally gifted in this profession, however, and found the work
decidedly uncongenial. Furthermore, his financial situation was by no means
comfortable, particularly after his marriage in 1863 and after the birth of
his children, Geneviève (in 1864) and Anatole (in 1871). To try to improve
matters he engaged in part-time activities, such as editing a magazine for a
few months at the end of 1874, writing a school textbook in 1877, and
translating another textbook in 1880. In October 1879, after a six-month
illness, his son Anatole died.

Despite these trials and tribulations, Mallarmé made steady progress with
his parallel career as a poet. His early poems, which he began contributing
to magazines in 1862, were influenced by Charles Baudelaire, whose recently
published collection Les Fleurs du mal ("The Flowers of Evil") was largely
concerned with the theme of escape from reality, a theme by which Mallarmé
was already becoming obsessed. But Baudelaire's escapism had been of an
essentially emotional and sensual kind -- a vague dream of tropical islands
and peaceful landscapes where all would be "luxe, calme et volupté"
("luxury, calm, and voluptuousness"). Mallarmé was of a much more
intellectual bent, and his determination to analyze the nature of the ideal
world and its relationship with reality is reflected in the two dramatic
poems he began to write in 1864 and 1865, respectively, Hérodiade
("Herodias") and L'Après-midi d'un faune ("The Afternoon of a Faun"), the
latter being the work that inspired Claude Debussy to compose his celebrated
Prélude a quarter of a century later.

Mallarmé died in 1898, at his cottage at Valvins, a village on the Seine
near Fontainebleau, his main residence after retirement.

        -- EB

[Poetic development]

By 1868 Mallarmé had come to the conclusion that, although nothing lies
beyond reality, within this nothingness lie the essences of perfect forms.
The poet's task is to perceive and crystallize these essences. In so doing,
the poet becomes more than a mere descriptive versifier, transposing into
poetic form an already existent reality; he becomes a veritable God,
creating something from nothing, conjuring up for the reader, as Mallarmé
himself put it, "l'absente de tous bouquets" -- the ideal flower that is
absent from all real bouquets. But to crystallize essences in this way, to
create the notion of floweriness, rather than to describe an actual flower,
demands an extremely subtle and complex use of all the resources of
language, and Mallarmé devoted himself during the rest of his life to
putting his theories into practice in what he called his Grand Oeuvre
("Great Work"), or Le Livre ("The Book"). He never came near to completing
this work, however, and the few preparatory notes that have survived give
little or no idea of what the end result might have been.

On the other hand, Mallarmé did complete a number of poems related to his
projected Grand Oeuvre, both in their themes and in their extremely
evocative use of language. Among these are several elegies -- the principal
ones being to Charles Baudelaire, Edgar Allan Poe, Richard Wagner, Théophile
Gautier, and Paul Verlaine -- that Mallarmé was commissioned to write at
various times in his career. He no doubt agreed to do them because the
traditional theme of the elegy -- the man is dead but he lives on in his
work -- is clearly linked to the poet's own belief that, although beyond
reality there is nothing, poetry has the power to transcend this
annihilation. In a second group of poems, Mallarmé wrote about poetry
itself, reflecting evocatively on his aims and achievements.

In addition to these two categories of poems, he also wrote some poems that
run counter to his obsession with the ideal world, though they, too, display
that magical use of language of which Mallarmé had made himself such a
master. These are the dozen or so sonnets he addressed to his mistress, Méry
Laurent, between 1884 and 1890, in which he expressed his supreme
satisfaction with reality. At that time, life was becoming much happier for
him, not only because his liaison was agreeable but also because a review of
him in the series of articles entitled Les Poètes maudits ("The Accursed
Poets") published by Verlaine in 1883 and the praise lavished on him by
J.-K. Huysmans in his novel À rebours ("The Wrong Way") in 1884 led to his
wide recognition as the most eminent French poet of the day. A series of
celebrated Tuesday evening meetings at his tiny flat in Paris were attended
by well-known writers, painters, and musicians of the time. All this perhaps
decreased his need to seek refuge in an ideal world, and in Un Coup de dés
jamais n'abolira le hasard, poème ("A Throw of Dice Will Never Abolish the
Hazard, Poem"), the work that appeared in 1897, the year before his death,
he found consolation in the thought that he had met with some measure of
success in giving poetry a truly creative function.

        -- EB

[Links]

Another translation of this poem:
[broken link] http://www.manson88.freeserve.co.uk/Sadness.htm

Other French poets on the Minstrels website:
Poem #534, "The Albatross", Charles Baudelaire
Poem #581, "Get Drunk!", Charles Baudelaire
Poem #556, "Ballade of the Hanged", Francois Villon
Poem #751, "Elegies", Guillevic

The Divine Image -- William Blake

       
(Poem #771) The Divine Image
 Cruelty has a Human Heart,
 And Jealousy a Human Face;
 Terror the Human Form Divine,
 And Secrecy the Human Dress.

 The Human Dress is forged Iron,
 The Human Form a fiery Forge,
 The Human Face a Furnace seal'd,
 The Human Heart is hungry Gorge.
-- William Blake
Blake is in full Apocalypse Mode here, all fire and fury and righteous
indignation. In a lesser poet it would be pretentious; in Blake, it's
amazingly, indisputably _right_.

thomas.

[Et cetera]

There are poets who are inextricably linked with particular forms and
metres; for example, Longfellow [1], Yeats [2] and yes, William Blake [3].

[1] See the often celebrated and even more often parodied "Song of
Hiawatha":
 By the shore of Gitchie Gumee,
 By the shining Big-Sea-Water,
 At the doorway of his wigwam,
 In the pleasant Summer morning,
 Hiawatha stood and waited.
        -- Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, "Hiawatha's Departure", Poem #362
See Poem #559, "The Modern Hiawatha", by George A. Strong, for a fairly nice
example of a Hiawatha parody.

[2] See, especially, the third and final section of Auden's elegy "In Memory
of W. B. Yeats" (Poem #50) for an excellent tribute in the form that the
Master made his own.

[3] Many of the "Songs of Innocence and Experience" are written in the same
metre as today's poem, as is "Auguries of Innocence". See
[broken link] http://www.geocities.com/~spanoudi/poems/blake02.html for the complete set
of the former, and Poem #368 on the Minstrels website for the latter.

[Minstrels Links]

Other poems by William Blake:
Poem #26, "Jerusalem"
Poem #66, "The Tyger"
Poem #97, "The Fly"
Poem #368, "Auguries of Innocence"
Poem #546, "The Sick Rose"

[Administrivia]

The email I sent a few hours ago titled "The Month in Comments: March 2001"
should have been titled "The Month in Comments: April 2001". An entirely
pardonable lapse, caused solely by this reviewer's occasional ignorance of
day, month, and, indeed, year.

As you may have noticed, there has been a preponderance of guest poem
submissions recently (and a corresponding paucity of commentary from Martin
and myself). This is because we've both been travelling and/or busy; we hope
to return you to your scheduled service soon.