Guest poem submitted by Nick Grundy, in response to yesterday's offering:
(Poem #871) I felt a Funeral, in my Brain I felt a Funeral, in my Brain, And Mourners to and fro Kept treading--treading--till it seemed That Sense was breaking through-- And when they all were seated, A Service, like a Drum-- Kept beating--beating--till I thought My Mind was going numb-- And then I heard them lift a Box And creak across my Soul With those same Boots of Lead, again, Then Space--began to toll, As all the Heavens were a Bell, And Being, but an Ear, And I, and Silence, some strange Race Wrecked, solitary, here-- And then a Plank in Reason, broke, And I dropped down, and down-- And hit a World, at every plunge, And Finished knowing--then-- |
How strange - I first read the Hopkins poem (#870) last week in a book by Andrew Solomon about depression called "The Noonday Demon" (it's wonderful, but this is not a book advert). If you feel like running a depression theme - I don't know if you have already - another one Solomon used which is also a bit of a favourite of mine is the Emily Dickinson above. Reading the one after the other, there's a rather lovely counterpoise between them: the rhythm of the Dickinson is measured where the Hopkins is frantic, but strangely (given that she uses "I" and he "we") I find the Hopkins more personal or individual. I hadn't thought of the poem, before reading Solomon, as being about depression, and of course I suppose one shouldn't really say it's *about* anything, but to my mind reading it as such makes the sense break through more forcefully than before. Not to, um, coin a phrase. Nick. [Minstrels Links] The Hopkins poem referred to above: Poem #870, No worst, there is none Other poems by Gerard Manley Hopkins: Poem #59, To a Young Child Poem #3, Inversnaid Poem #35, The Windhover Poem #134, Pied Beauty Poem #260, Moonrise Poem #606, God's Grandeur Other poems by Emily Dickinson: Poem #92, There's a certain Slant of light Poem #174, A Route of Evanescence Poem #341, The Grass so little has to do - Poem #458, The Chariot Poem #529, If you were coming in the fall Poem #580, Split the Lark Poem #687, Success is counted sweetest Poem #711, I'm Nobody! Who are you? Poem #829, It dropped so low in my regard
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hello my name is orianna smith and im doing a research project on EMILY DICKINSON and i'd like to know what kind of poems (ballads, free verse, ode) the following are: "i felt a funeral in my brain", "The grass", "The snake", and "The Railroad Train". if you could answer back as soon as possible, i'd be nice. thx bye. plz e-mail me at
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