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Futility -- Wilfred Owen

Guest poem sent in by Vijay Victor
(Poem #288) Futility
 Move him into the sun--
 Gently its touch awoke him once,
 At home, whispering of fields unsown.
 Always it awoke him, even in France,
 Until this morning and this snow.
 If anything might rouse him now
 The kind old sun will know.

 Think how it wakes the seeds--
 Woke, once, the clays of a cold star.
 Are limbs so dear-achieved, are sides
 Full-nerved,--still warm,--too hard to stir?
 Was it for this the clay grew tall?
 --O what made fatuous sunbeams toil
 To break earth's sleep at all?
-- Wilfred Owen
   I feel this poem, more specifically, the last five lines epitomises
futility. I like the way he evokes contrasting sensations using the images
of sun (warmth) and snow (cold). "Cold star" is ultimate!

  "The kind old sun ... whispering of fields unsown" also "wakes the
seeds". Owen seems to be getting us to empathise with the 'benevolent'
sun. I can even feel sorry that all his work was of no avail.

  Further, i feel his description of the creation of man ('clay grew tall')
captures the essence of the act far better than any painting i have ever
seen.(i'm sure many would beg to disagree here but still). Much more can be
said i guess but i requested higher authorities to do that.

vijay

[Vijay asked me to interject a few comments about the form of the poem - I
wasn't intending to, since (as I must reemphasise) this is not about
critical analysis of the poems, it's about personal response and
appreciation. Still, I couldn't not comment on Owen's use of half-rhymes[1]
- especially interesting in the last three lines of each verse, where the
middle line is tied in to the surrounding two without the choppy effect that
a pure ccc rhyme scheme would have had.

[1] 'consonance' if you want a more technical-sounding term, but it's
considerably weaker a word

m. ]

Mad About You -- Gordon Matthew 'Sting' Sumner

       
(Poem #287) Mad About You
A stone's throw from Jerusalem
I walked a lonely mile in the moonlight
And though a million stars were shining
My heart was lost on a distant planet
That whirls around the April moon
Whirling in an arc of sadness
I'm lost without you, I'm lost without you

    Though all my kingdoms turn to sand and fall into the sea
    I'm mad about you, I'm mad about you

And from the dark secluded valleys
I heard the ancient songs of sadness
But every step I thought of you
Every footstep only you
Every star a grain of sand
The leavings of a dried up ocean
Tell me, how much longer,
How much longer?

They say a city in the desert lies
The vanity of an ancient king
But the city lies in broken pieces
Where the wind howls and the vultures sing
These are the works of man
This is the sum of our ambition
It would make a prison of my life
If you became another's wife

    With every prison blown to dust, my enemies walk free
    I'm mad about you, I'm mad about you

And I have never in my life
Felt more alone than I do now
Although I claim dominions over all I see
It means nothing to me
There are no victories
In all our histories
Without love

A stone's throw from Jerusalem
I walked a lonely mile in the moonlight
And though a million stars were shining
My heart was lost on a distant planet
That whirls around the April moon
Whirling in an arc of sadness
I'm lost without you, I'm lost without you

    And though you hold the keys to ruin of everything I see
    With every prison blown to dust, my enemies walk free
    Though all my kingdoms turn to sand and fall into the sea
    I'm mad about you, I'm mad about you.
-- Gordon Matthew 'Sting' Sumner
As I pointed out the last time I did a Sting piece, it's difficult (and indeed,
unfair) to judge musical lyrics using the same yardstick as for 'ordinary'
poetry. For one thing, songwriters operate under far stricter constraints than
even the most metrical of poets, because they have to fit their words to the
'mood' [1] of the accompanying music; at the same time, when their lyrics are
reproduced on the printed page, they lose the wealth of detail and emotional
content provided by performance. It's a no-win situation.

Having said that, there are still a few lyricists who stand out. Dylan, Cohen,
Springsteen and Simon are the obvious examples, but I have a soft corner for the
troika of Joni Mitchell, Carole King and Suzanne Vega. And I like Sting.

As far 'Mad About You' goes... well, I suggest you read the poem, then try to
get a hold of the album ('The Soul Cages, 1991) and give it a listen. Then
reread the poem. The difference will stagger you.

thomas.

[1] An undefined and undefinable term, if ever I saw one.

[Minstrels Links]

I've done Sting before, the densely textured 'Soul Cages', at poem #114

Other musicians to have featured on this list include Paul Simon, Leonard Cohen
and of course Bob Dylan; you can read their work (and much much more) at the
Minstrels website, http://www.cs.rice.edu/~ssiyer/minstrels/

[Random Meanderings]

Have you ever wondered how we select our poems, gentle reader? Scroll down...

Yesterday's would-be Ozymandias was what reminded me of this poem; Sting's
        'They say a city in the desert lies
        The vanity of an ancient king'
resonates both with Shelley's famous
                'Round the decay
        Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare
        The lone and level sands stretch far away.
and with Horace Smith's somewhat less accomplished
                'The city's gone!
        Naught but the leg remaining to disclose
        The sight of that forgotten Babylon.'

By a happy coincidence, 'a stone's throw from Jerusalem' fits in nicely with a
poem I'm going to run next week (a poem which I've been planning to do for some
time now - you'll see why when I run it). That poem in turn is part of a
Christmas / New Year's theme which will inform my choices in the days to come.

Yes, I have a convoluted mind :-).

An Elegy on the Death of a Mad Dog -- Oliver Goldsmith

       
(Poem #286) An Elegy on the Death of a Mad Dog
  Good people all, of every sort,
  Give ear unto my song;
  And if you find it wondrous short,
  It cannot hold you long.

  In Islington there was a man,
  Of whom the world might say
  That still a godly race he ran,
  Whene'er he went to pray.

  A kind and gentle heart he had,
  To comfort friends and foes;
  The naked every day he clad,
  When he put on his clothes.

  And in that town a dog was found,
  As many dogs there be,
  Both mongrel, puppy, whelp and hound,
  And curs of low degree.

  This dog and man at first were friends;
  But when a pique began,
  The dog, to gain some private ends,
  Went mad and bit the man.

  Around from all the neighbouring streets
  The wondering neighbours ran,
  And swore the dog had lost his wits,
  To bite so good a man.

  The wound it seemed both sore and sad
  To every Christian eye;
  And while they swore the dog was mad,
  They swore the man would die.

  But soon a wonder came to light,
  That showed the rogues they lied:
  The man recovered of the bite,
  The dog it was that died.
-- Oliver Goldsmith
Another wonderfully cutting poem, the irony being all the better for being
understated. The verse, likewise, has a deliberately simple rhythm to it, an
appeal to 'popularity' established by the first stanza, where the narrator
is cast into the mould of storyteller rather than 'high' poet.

Of course, the poem itself is clear enough, and its central character
practically a stereotype, but there's apparently more to it than that -
according to the Dictionary of Sensibility,

  The dog, as we know, is Friedrich Nietzsche; [...] a figure of
  sensibility, the mad philosopher/prophet/poet who either heals or infects
  the community.

Well, I didn't know, but I'll take their word for it. It goes on to explain
the bite as an act that 'exposes the community's belief in the harmlessness
of corruption'. Read the whole theory at
[broken link] http://www.engl.virginia.edu/~enec981/dictionary/24goldsmithD2.html

m.

Biography and Assessment:

 Goldsmith, Oliver

  b. Nov. 10, 1730, Kilkenny West, County Westmeath, Ire.
  d. April 4, 1774, London

  The son of an Irish clergyman, he was graduated from Trinity College,
  Dublin, in 1749. He studied medicine at Edinburgh and Leiden, but his
  career as a physician was quite unsuccessful. In 1756 he settled in
  London, where he achieved some success as a miscellaneous contributor to
  periodicals and as the author of Enquiry into the Present State of Polite
  Learning in Europe (1759). But it was not until The Citizen of the World
  (1762), a series of whimsical and satirical essays, that he was recognized
  as an able man of letters. His fame grew with The Traveler (1764), a
  philosophic poem, and the nostalgic pastoral The Deserted Village (1770).
  However, his literary reputation rests on his two comedies, The
  Good-natur'd Man (1768) and She Stoops to Conquer (1773), and his only
  novel, The Vicar of Wakefield (1766). His comedies injected a much-needed
  sense of realism into the dull, sentimental plays of the period. They are
  lively, witty, and imbued with an endearing humanity. The Vicar of
  Wakefield is the warm, humorous, if somewhat melodramatic, story of a
  country parson and his family. Although he earned a great deal of money in
  his lifetime, Goldsmith's improvidence kept him poor. Boswell depicted him
  as a ridiculous, blundering, but tenderhearted and generous creature. He
  had the friendship of many of the literary and artistic great of his day,
  the most notable being that of Samuel Johnson.

        -- Columbia Encyclopedia

 Goldsmith's rise from total obscurity was a matter of only a few years. He
 worked as an apothecary's assistant, school usher, physician, and as a hack
 writer--reviewing, translating, and compiling. It remains amazing that this
 young Irish vagabond, unknown, uncouth, unlearned, and unreliable, was yet
 able within a few years to climb from obscurity to mix with aristocrats and
 the intellectual elite of London. Such a rise was possible because
 Goldsmith had one quality, soon noticed by booksellers and the public, that
 his fellow literary hacks did not possess--the gift of a graceful, lively,
 and readable style.

 [...]

 When Oliver Goldsmith died he had achieved eminence among the writers of
 his time as an essayist, a poet, and a dramatist. He was one "who left
 scarcely any kind of writing untouched and who touched nothing that he did
 not adorn"--such was the judgment expressed by his friend Dr. Johnson. His
 contemporaries were as one in their high regard for Goldsmith the writer,
 but they were of different minds concerning the man himself. He was, they
 all agreed, one of the oddest personalities of his time.

 [...]

 Goldsmith's success as a writer lay partly in the charm of personality
 emanated by his style--his affection for his characters, his mischievous
 irony, and his spontaneous interchange of gaiety and sadness. He was, as a
 writer, "natural, simple, affecting." It is by their human personalities
 that his novel and his plays succeed, not by any brilliance of plot, ideas,
 or language. In the poems again it is the characters that are remembered
 rather than the landscapes--the village parson, the village schoolmaster,
 the sharp, yet not unkindly portraits of Garrick and Burke. Goldsmith's
 poetry lives by its own special softening and mellowing of the traditional
 heroic couplet into simple melodies that are quite different in character
 from the solemn and sweeping lines of 18th-century blank verse. In his
 novel and plays Goldsmith helped to humanize his era's literary
 imagination, without growing sickly or mawkish. Goldsmith saw people, human
 situations, and indeed the human predicament from the comic point of view;
 he was a realist, something of a satirist, but in his final judgments
 unfailingly charitable.

        -- EB

On a Stupendous Leg of Granite, Discovered Standing by Itself in the Deserts of Egypt, with the Inscription Inserted Below -- Horace Smith

 From the so-bad-that-they're-good department...
(Poem #285) On a Stupendous Leg of Granite, Discovered Standing by Itself in the Deserts of Egypt, with the Inscription Inserted Below
In Egypt's sandy silence, all alone,
Stands a gigantic Leg, which far off throws
The only shadow that the Desert knows.
"I am great Ozymandias," saith the stone,
"The King of kings: this mighty city shows
The wonders of my hand." The city's gone!
Naught but the leg remaining to disclose
The sight of that forgotten Babylon.
We wonder, and some hunter may express
Wonder like ours, when through the wilderness
Where London stood, holding the wolf in chase,
He meets some fragment huge, and stops to guess
What wonderful, but unrecorded, race
Once dwelt in that annihilated place.
-- Horace Smith
"It appears that in 1817 Shelley held a sonnet-writing session with his friend,
the poet Horace Smith. Both wrote a sonnet on the same subject, but while
Shelley came up with Ozymandias, Mr Smith produced something so delightfully
horrendous I simply have to indulge [myself] even further, and include it here
as well.

The poem was cited by Guy Davenport of the University of Kentucky in a New York
Times article a few years ago, which concluded: "Genius may also be knowing how
to title a poem." "

    -- Leo Breebaart, in the Annotated Pratchett File v7a.0, which you can read
in its entirety at  http://www.us.lspace.org/books/apf/index.html

thomas.

[Links]

Shelley's famous sonnet can be found at poem #22

Surprisingly enough, Ozymandias is the only poem of his to have featured on the
Minstrels - I guess neither Martin nor myself are fans enough. Readers are
invited to rectify the situation with guest submissions.

A web search for a biography of Horace Smith, Poet  failed to turn up anything
of interest. I wonder why.

'MOST ANGLERS ARE VERY HUMANE'--Daily Paper -- Norman Rowland Gale

       
(Poem #284) 'MOST ANGLERS ARE VERY HUMANE'--Daily Paper
 The kind-hearted angler was sadly pursuing
 His calling unhallowed of choking the fishes;
 He bitterly wept, for of course he was doing
 An action most strongly opposed to his wishes!

 His vertabra shook as he musingly planned
 How kindly to threadle the worm he'd begun--it
 Was plain had the reptile possessed a right hand
 The penitent angler would gladly have wrung it!

 He cast in his float filled with tearful emotion
 And murmured "How fearful, how terrible this is!"
 And just at that moment, amid some commotion,
 He jerked out a panting and rather small /piscis/!

 "Unfortunate fishlet, what dread impulse brought you
 To meddle with bait which I carelessly threw in?
 My dear little swimmer, I'm sorry I caught you,
 So please don't blame me for contriving your ruin!"

 "O barbel and salmon-trout, tench, dace and gugdeon,
 O ev'ry fat jack and each eel (not a conger)
 Why, why will you grieve me and stir up my dudgeon?
 Go, die on his hooks who has eyes that are stronger!"

 But, however, whilst moaning he pulled out a score,
 And continued his wonderful luck till at last--it
 Was plain that his soft heart could bear it no more,
 Too deep were his groans, and--too full was his basket!
-- Norman Rowland Gale
A type of poem that has always intrigued me is one written in response to a
specific incident or situation. This is particularly true when the poem is
humorous - there's an extra piquancy to the fact that the incident the poet
has so amusingly described is indeed true, or, more accurately, that the
poet has produced so wonderfully appropriate a response to the situation.

Today's gently sarcastic poem is a nice example of the genre. The form is
also one very popular among writers of light verse - the predominantly
triple verse, and the heavy use of feminine rhymes, give it a light,
tripping feel (in particular, ending with a feminine rhyme avoids the risk
of closing on a heavy note). Again, it is a somewhat 'playful' form - the
poet often willing to sacrifice the mot juste in favour of a clever rhyme or
unexpected polysyllabic word.

Of course, like most such poems, it was never destined for greatness; but
equally, greatness was never its aim. In fact, even the fact that it has
withstood the test of time is not the point - I like it more for its
topicality, for the fact that it was a wonderful rejoinder to a careless
headline (one wonders where the poets are to immortalise more recent
examples, such as the famous 'Man Found Dead in Graveyard').

m.

Links:

Another lovely 'incidental' poem (though in a much harsher vein) is O'Kelly's
Litany for Doneraile poem #266

Norman Gale seems to be another of those poets without an accessible
biography, though you can read several of his poems at the Poets' Corner
[broken link] http://geocities.com/~spanoudi/poems/poem-gh.html