Guest poem submitted by Bob Cooper, back in February; we're only getting to run it now:
(Poem #865) Valentine Not a red rose or a satin heart. I give you an onion. It is a moon wrapped in brown paper. It promises light like the careful undressing of love. Here. It will blind you with tears like a lover. It will make your reflection a wobbling photo of grief. I am trying to be truthful. Not a cute card or kissogram. I give you an onion. Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips, possessive and faithful as we are, for as long as we are. Take it. Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring, if you like. Lethal. Its scent will cling to your fingers, cling to your knife. |
From "Mean time" Anvil books, 1993. Some poems stay with you from the moment you read them. This is one of them. It's direct. Simple. Worth going back to. It's allusive. I hear Cordelia telling King Lear she loves him like salt. I hear Peer Gynt peeling his onion. Then I just hear the poet, again, telling it how it is for her and her lover with the uncomfortable frankness and absurdity we sometimes need when we start using the language of love. I guess it's as simply complicated as any or all relationships that mean so much to each of us. I think its strength is partly because of its juxtaposition of positive and negative features, and because we are never left with anything that's clearly good or distinctly bad. I hope it isn't just a poem of the 1990s. Bob Cooper. [About the poet] Originally she's from Glasgow, but she learnt a lot about poetry in Liverpool (where she was a pal of Adrian Henri). Now she knocks around in London with Jackie Kay (another poet from Glasgow). Dated details of her poetry are in the Oxford Companion to 20th Century Literature.
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I love this poem. It's anti-corny and pro-realism. I look forward to reading more from her.
The poem is really beautiful, and no doubt - this is a really talented poet, I'd love to read more of his things.
In this poem, he just passed out and around all the terms and known feelings, when you can see motifs, metaphors and messages hidden in piles of onions, in total, so good.
The poem is really beautiful, and no doubt - this is a really talented poet, I'd love to read more of his things.
In this poem, he just passed out and around all the terms and known feelings, when you can see motifs, metaphors and messages hidden in piles of onions, in total, so good.
Love can hurt and make you cry, love can kill, or leave an everlasting memory, like the scent of the onion on your hands
Love it. In this poem, the onion represents how plain and ordinary love is at first sight. However, underneath the plain outside there is something magical and wonderful - in this case, the poet referring to the onion as a moon, which is traditionally seen as a romantic icon.
'promises light' make poeple believe that the relationship will ne strong but C.A Duffy only days promises so not all relationship turn out good
nothing to say but brilliant
I love this poem. It's anti-corny and pro-realism. I look forward to reading more from her. This poem has an unusual object and that what I like about this poem.
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This poem is awesome!
For my homework I have to write a poem of my own,I'm comparing love to a lightbulb,gluestick or a rock.
Any ideas???
Thanks x
Amazing Poem, Doing it for my GCSEs. Love it sooooo much, looking forward to read more from her
I am going to buy new pair of shoes for this valentine.Your Poem Remind me of my lover
great poem, love the extended metaphor of the onion , it creates depth in meaningful valentines gifts
My name is Zak and I really want to fuck the lesbians of the world. You me and a cup. Shit in my mouth you horny milfs of America.
what is the relationship in this poem
this poem has so much meaning love is like a onion in so many differnt ways....
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طريقة عمل الدونات طريقة عمل الغريبة طريقة عمل البان كيك طريقة عمل الكنافة طريقة عمل البسبوسة بالصور طريقة عمل الكيك طريقة عمل عجينة البيتزا فوائد القرفه فوائد الزبيب
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